Week two reflection:
This week was exciting, I really was worried about the second week but actually it was more organized we have done a great achievement with my lovely teachers. Let me tell you something about it. This week I have learned more about how we can write a critical respond and focused on the important points to improve our writing step by step. I really want to mention to this point when i and some of my friends got our essays we really surprised when we saw a lot of comments in purple pen, but when we read these comments it is really useful and interesting some time because they use some words (great intro..., perfect, well done ...and so on) and that encourage us to do better on the next time. Clearly that" Carla and Daniella spent a long time to correct our essays “many thanks to them "and as Abdulla said we are in skillful Hands.
Moreover, during this week we have discussed one issue that (every one who can, should learn English) through the discussion board, I think the discussion board is a good tool to use for an online course. It was nice to post a message and have someone respond.
hi rema,
ReplyDeleteThat is geart. and I totally agree with you. Our teachers are very smart. Before they have started teaching us, they relized that their students (us) need a spiritual dose which work to instil confidence inside them. Really, we were so worried and we were not so sure enough about E7. I still remember my teacher's words in the second week. Hre words were the critical point which changed me 180 degrees.
Regarding Rema's prove, Sorry rema, a quick critical response to your first prg. In the end of your first prg. you uses a bad evidence. The use of Abdulla's words as an evidence is the worst evidenc may anyone use to prove her/his ideas. Yes I strongly agree with you not because of Abdulla's opinion, but because you seys the truth.
If you wanted to had a strong argument, do not use Abdulla' veiw as an avidence.
Good luck rema
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